I'd say pretty damn good for a first
However, the drums need a little work. They feel just overall underwhelming. Perhaps it would benefit the drop as well with a little delay or reverb.
Really liked the way you ended it.
I'd say pretty damn good for a first
However, the drums need a little work. They feel just overall underwhelming. Perhaps it would benefit the drop as well with a little delay or reverb.
Really liked the way you ended it.
Amateurish
But that is part of the appeal it seems. I like the composition, but the sounds & synths used are too basic. If you like, I could send you a few files to help you out.
BTW, the bass synth/kick in the beginning sounded like it was starting off like the older stuff by The Prodigy-- I like that.
Yea its very amateur in build, its my first track in the dance department ever. Nah, no need to send files, I got loads better now lol, but thanks for listening XD
I think the big problem
is that the drums are the most powerful part of the song, and that's not saying much.
The composition is nice (though I'm not a fan of that synth you used in the beginning), but overall it is just underwhelming.
Rather interesting bass synth
I can't say I've really heard a bass synth in a drop quite like that. Definitely one of your best.
I agree with empty.
But your bass has come a long way since when you started out. It's really picking up :). don't stop now.
Composition here is good, just a little underwhelming with the bass.
We all start out with almost no recognition. Don't let that get you down. Keep the new stuff coming.
Can't say I'm too into the drop
But overall the rest is pretty good. The drop just isn't working for me (at least the first half).
Perhaps a little TAL-Dub III fx on the basses during the first half of the drop would benefit in some parts; as it is, it feels a little empty to me.
Anyway, I liked the composition overall. It's just that first half of the drop that gets to me and sticks out for feeling lacking.
I enjoy this
Far more than a good number of your more recent tracks. Seems you're getting an edge back that, while not very far gone, was a little diminished all the same. Keep up the good work.
Rather dirty.
I'd say a decent composition overall. Not the best, but enjoyable. I just wish there was at least a breakdown leading up to a second drop, but it's alright.
I'll have another go at it soon and get you that drop boi.
May not be as talky
But that is a good thing in this case. Definitely one of your better tracks. I really like your use of whatever crushing you did throughout. I also enjoy the progression of the lead synth; interesting melody.
Thanks a lot, dude :) Good to still be getting reviews from you! Glad you liked the song and I can't wait to hear what you've gotta say on my future projects ;)
I'm not as thoroughly blown away as others
But I enjoy the track nonetheless. Some things in this piece just felt awkward to me, and other times it felt like there may have been a little too much going on.
The drop is definitely in your style, TI. Well, the first one was obvious at least.
Overall, a good job.
yea i took over the first drop and then i added Nk's intro and that squeaky lead to the second drop. what parts felt awkward? thanks for the review though.
I am Reali-tGlitch/Echo Ex Machina/Phrieksho. I have been making music officially since 07, technically since 04. As Phrieksho I stream on Twitch and make gaming related content. Aspiring voice actor, feel free to contact!
Age 31, Male
Westlake High School (2012)
Seattle, WA
Joined on 1/16/07