I heard the intro and thought "Oh, this is probably gonna suck."
Boy was I surprised.
I heard the intro and thought "Oh, this is probably gonna suck."
Boy was I surprised.
Despite my crappy mic, I think you're voices are spot-on. Good job on the voices :)
thank you ^-^
Rather nice. Good for both chilling and kicking ass.
It was unexpected, and I must say it's one of your best so far, Mr. Brooks.
Thank you very much, I appreciate it, sir.
It was a very nice try, but you are lacking some of the major notes (such as the half-note changes in the intro chords).
Overall, your tone is great and spot-on. It's just the minute parts that held this piece back.
Keep at it, though.
This is a good example of a Thugstep. Rather interesting piece; wasn't expecting it.
Thanks!
Even while it felt a little basic, it was definitely a full sound, and a great remix. I would love to see a remake with a slightly better lead synth, but it's great for what it is.
I loved your use of synths (even for basic synths), but your percussion instruments were default. I recommend finding some new percussion and expanding your repertoire from the basic stuff. If you want more VST's, I recommend checking vstplanet; I've gotten lots of free ones from there.
You are definitely on the right track, and we all have room to grow :) Keep at it!
cool, thank you. yeah I've just had a look at that site. looks pretty awesome, cheers.
I honestly can say that I don't think that Drum n Bass is the proper genre to label this as; it's more of a goa style (to get technical), and is more suited to techno if you ask me.
I also liked the riffs you had going with FL Slayer.
Overall, I could picture this for an action scene, but I wouldn't really count it as drum n bass.
I'm honestly not surprised you don't want to make this an official track, as it isn't the best composition overall.
It is a good start, however. We all have room to grow :)
i am a techno artist not a DnB artist it's not easy
True to it's genre, definitely, as it is good for letting go of your worries and such. Now, I cannot say that I really enjoyed this piece; probably because of the repetition. I won't deny that the composition is good; I'm just saying that I don't enjoy it personally.
Its ok lol hehe :)
Certainly has it's own feel, to say the least.
That isn't to say that the feel was good, though. It has soul, but that soul just isn't very pleasing to the ears. The bass would be much better if (since there is a lack thereof) it had more melody to it, or it wasn't so formant. Normally, many artists have too much going on in the song; in this case, there just isn't enough. you have drums, and an honestly underwhelming, mediocre bass synth.
I can see from your profile that you haven't been at it for too long, so don't be discouraged from making music. I've been at it for 5+ years, and it took about 3 and a half, maybe more, years for it to actually start sounding really good.
You have a start, just as we all start somewhere. You just need time and practice. I am being as honest as I can with my review and my score; I'm not trying to offend you or shoot you down. I just hope this was constructive in some way. Keep at it; you might be on to something here.
I am Reali-tGlitch/Echo Ex Machina/Phrieksho. I have been making music officially since 07, technically since 04. As Phrieksho I stream on Twitch and make gaming related content. Aspiring voice actor, feel free to contact!
Age 31, Male
Westlake High School (2012)
Seattle, WA
Joined on 1/16/07